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Old May 24, 2007, 02:38 AM // 02:38   #1
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I took hours doing this and it's a new style of art I'm trying using just Macromedia Flash. I haven't heard other opinions or feedback from anyone so I was wondering if I can ask you guys for some.



Please leave some if you can, I would appreciate it, thanks!

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Old May 24, 2007, 05:16 AM // 05:16   #2
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I like the contrast you used her face could be a bit rounder though (to match her round shoulder). The mans lower leg seems to be a bit short. You should also draw bigger eyes, so they look less suprised. The white lips were on purpose?

Anyways, thats what I can add ^^ I like the over glossy anime style u used the pose is pretty sweet aswell

keep it up!
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Old May 24, 2007, 06:15 AM // 06:15   #3
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Nice pic, but 2 things irk me.

1) The guys hair is lightest on the right, showing that the light source is also on the right, but the womans face is darkest on the right, showing that the light source is on the left. This conflicts.

2) Too glossy IMO, but meh, if you like it, keep it.
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Old May 24, 2007, 08:02 AM // 08:02   #4
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The leg looks like a stump and the chick looks like a dude.
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Old May 24, 2007, 08:44 AM // 08:44   #5
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Might I ask why you chose Flash? I know a couple of people that use it...and I have no idea why :S
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